Give me this chance



 Your eyes are so crystal blue
staring into my chocolate eyes,
   I knew that it was no surprise,
that when you touched my arm
you stole my heart,
Now I'm not sure how I will feel
when we are apart,
   I know you've had some tough times
with girls in the past,
     But I promise you this if you give Me
This chance that those tough times
 will be your last,
   When your body is close to mine
 you make my heart skip a beat,
    You make me want to hide my face
beneath the sheet,
    Although I know you may need time
to heal,
Just know every emotion you have I will
be the first to feel,
I'm not sure what to say about
 how I feel when I am close to you,
    I Just want you to know I get
this feeling with very few,
    I hope you see that I am one of few women
that is loyal to only one,
    If you give me this chance to
make you smile we will do nothing,
but have fun for a little while,     
    I will always be the one you
can run beside,
    And if your feeling sad the tears
of mine will feel the same,
     I see the strength behind your smile,
 that you fight so hard to show
every once in awhile,
      All the jokes and laughs you try to make,
 No one else will see it's fake,
      I will always be that girl that they
call wifey,
      I cook, I clean, I can make you feel
that magical sting,
    Just give me this chance and you will see,
    You will never understand the amount
of time you wasted on history,
       I only need one and I swear that's all,
so if you choose me,
    I will put you above all,
         A relationship takes teamwork,
   And teamwork is all you will see from me,
               Just give me a chance,                    
                  and you will see.

             Written : Hayley Miller,
                August 25th,2022
                      @ 1:10pm

About this poem

I was talking to a guy for a few weeks before I finally decided to go and meet him and I watched in less than 24 hours how much woman have hurt him so it's a poem about how he somewhat makes me feel and asking him to give me this chance

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Written on August 25, 2022

Submitted by hayleyakaharleyquinn on August 25, 2022

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,823
Words 383
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 52, 3

Hayley Kristine Miller

I am 28 years old I have always looked for love in the wrong places and I am a single mother of 4 and love is always on my mind and finding the right person has always been my journey more…

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