Analysis of One of few



The Stars light up when you're in view
I didn't know that you were one of few
You hold my hand throughout the day
That's when I try to keep my feelings at Bay
When you kiss me so gentle and so sweet
I think of it as my sweetest treat
Your eyes sparkle in the Sun
When I'm with you I have so much fun
Although I didn't expect feelings to rise
I couldn't expect a better prize
Your laugh is so gentle and so kind
That's all I can think about in my mind
When I'm with you I don't tell time
That's when I know I'm at my prime
Stars light up when you're in view
Now I know that you are one of few


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGAA
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101 1101110111 11110101 11111111011 1111110011 111111101 1110001 111111111 1110011011 110010101 111110011 1111101011 11111111 11111111 1111101 111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 591
Words 128
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 452
Words per stanza (avg) 128

About this poem

It tells about a feeling when looking to the one I love

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Written on March 16, 2022

Submitted by survivorslife20 on March 21, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Hayley Kristine Miller

I am 28 years old I have always looked for love in the wrong places and I am a single mother of 4 and love is always on my mind and finding the right person has always been my journey more…

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