Thoughts temple
Florin Dragoș Minculescu 1978 (România)
It should be a normal day,
Sunshines were embracing the view,
And everything seems so vivid.
But then inside,
A bunch of thoughts..,
Were making so much noise.
I sat and listened.
They were arguing about something.
I didn't quite understand.
Suddenly, one of them,
Oddly suggested to pray.
To whom, I've asked myself.
I was dismayed.
These thoughts, one at the time
They were praying to ..
A me.
I was transformed.
I've become a temple for my thoughts.
But this wasn't just right,
What could, anymore, this "me" to be?
It couldn't be, I couldn't be..
Be what?
Suddenly an immaterial touch embosoms us.
Which us?
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Written on February 02, 2022
Submitted by d.minculescu on February 02, 2022
Modified by d.minculescu on February 02, 2022
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABXXCX XXXXAXXXBD XCXDDX EE |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 618 |
Words | 133 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 10, 6, 2 |
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