Thoughts temple



It should be a normal day,
Sunshines were embracing the view,
And everything seems so vivid.
But then inside,
A bunch of thoughts..,
Were making so much noise.

I sat and listened.
They were arguing about something.
I didn't quite understand.
Suddenly, one of them,
Oddly suggested to pray.
To whom, I've asked myself.
I was dismayed.
These thoughts, one at the time
They were praying to ..
A me.


I was transformed.
I've become a temple for my thoughts.
But this wasn't just right,
What could, anymore, this "me" to be?
It couldn't be, I couldn't be..
Be what?

Suddenly an immaterial touch embosoms us.
Which us?
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Written on February 02, 2022

Submitted by d.minculescu on February 02, 2022

Modified by d.minculescu on February 02, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXXCX XXXXAXXXBD XCXDDX EE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 618
Words 133
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 10, 6, 2

Florin Dragoș Minculescu

Once upon the time I had a friend and his name was Me. I and Me were indissoluble friends, he was I' s world. One day, Me decided to go in search of self and at one point disappeared. I is better now without him. Me was anxious, scared and had a lot of wishes and opinions about everything. Now, that Me is gone, I has discovered a peace that it didn't know it existed. more…

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