Analysis of Thoughts temple



It should be a normal day,
Sunshines were embracing the view,
And everything seems so vivid.
But then inside,
A bunch of thoughts..,
Were making so much noise.

I sat and listened.
They were arguing about something.
I didn't quite understand.
Suddenly, one of them,
Oddly suggested to pray.
To whom, I've asked myself.
I was dismayed.
These thoughts, one at the time
They were praying to ..
A me.

I was transformed.
I've become a temple for my thoughts.
But this wasn't just right,
What could, anymore, this "me" to be?
It couldn't be, I couldn't be..
Be what?

Suddenly an immaterial touch embosoms us.
Which us?


Scheme ABXXCX XXXXAXXXBD XCXDDX EE
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1001001 0101110 1101 0111 010111 11010 101000110 110101 100111 1001011 11111 1101 111101 10101 01 1101 101010111 111011 11011111 11011101 11 10010100111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 618
Words 133
Sentences 18
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 10, 6, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Written on February 02, 2022

Submitted by d.minculescu on February 02, 2022

Modified by d.minculescu on February 02, 2022

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Florin Dragoș Minculescu

Once upon the time I had a friend and his name was Me. I and Me were indissoluble friends, he was I' s world. One day, Me decided to go in search of self and at one point disappeared. I is better now without him. Me was anxious, scared and had a lot of wishes and opinions about everything. Now, that Me is gone, I has discovered a peace that it didn't know it existed. more…

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