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I see I

Florin Dragoș Minculescu 1978 (România)

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I see the heart
But, I also see the mind.
I see the self seeing the heart and the mind
But, I also see not seeing the seeing.

I see the heart
And because I can see it,
I see the self
But, I also see the mind.

I see the mind
And because I can see it,
I see the "i"
But, I also see the heart.

I see the I
But, I see the " i" standing in between.
Can I see the seeing of the I
So that I can see the I beyond the "i"?
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Written on October 19, 2021

Submitted by d.minculescu on October 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABbx ACxB bCDa Dxdd
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 430
Words 101
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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Florin Dragoș Minculescu

Once upon the time I had a friend and his name was Me. I and Me were indissoluble friends, he was I' s world. One day, Me decided to go in search of self and at one point disappeared. I is better now without him. Me was anxious, scared and had a lot of wishes and opinions about everything. Now, that Me is gone, I has discovered a peace that it didn't know it existed. more…

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