Analysis of You are my everything



Sometimes I feel as if nothing worth this pain
I walk outside as it starts to rain
The rain dries all my tears away 
Wish I could find the right words to say

You are my everything
I wake up with you in my head
If only you could see how bad I shed
Those tears will never fade

My skin full of scars
I see your face while looking at the stars
I wish for a better place where we can share our love
Trust me and sit on the clouds above 

You are my everything
I wake up with you in my head
If only you could see how bad I shed
Those tears will never fade
You are my everything
I go to sleep with you on my mind
If only you wasn't so blind
You'd see we were meant to be

I know everything is better when I'm with you
Although sometimes everything else just not true
I look up just so I can see you smile to me
You are my everything, how can you not see?

You are my everything
I wake up with you in my head
If only you could see how long I prayed
Those tears had finally fade
You are my everything
I go to sleep with you on my mind
I wake up and feel you laying next to me
I always told you that we were meant to be


Scheme aabb CDDE ffgg CDDECHhi jjii CDeeCHii
Poetic Form
Metre 01111110111 111111111 01111101 111101111 11110 11111011 1101111111 111101 11111 1111110101 11101011111101 110110101 11110 11111011 1101111111 111101 11110 111111111 11011011 1110111 11101101111 101101111 111111111111 1111011111 11110 11111011 1101111111 1111001 11110 111111111 11101110111 1111110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,078
Words 240
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 8, 4, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:12 min read
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Shir Hanochi

"life isn't measured by the numbers of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away". With my poetry, I want to make more of those breathtaking moments, to put everything I feel into words and let everyone else enjoy it as well as learning from it.English is not my first language, therefore I'd like to hear any grammar or spelling mistakes. Thank you all for understanding, and enjoy reading. :) more…

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