Empty space



Sometimes she finds herself
Wandering around the universe
Passing by an empty space
Thinking of another direction reverse

She keeps moving, searching
She looks up and sees nothing
She wonders how long left
Until the hammer will emerge the cleft

A piece of her soul fell apart
As if a bore have been cut
She finds an empty space in her heart
But no room for a fresh start
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Submitted on September 06, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BBCC DXDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 359
Words 69
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

Shir Hanochi

"life isn't measured by the numbers of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away". With my poetry, I want to make more of those breathtaking moments, to put everything I feel into words and let everyone else enjoy it as well as learning from it.English is not my first language, therefore I'd like to hear any grammar or spelling mistakes. Thank you all for understanding, and enjoy reading. :) more…

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