Our very first day



Hey, this is our very first day together,
I'm so excited as if I had never
Had anyone so close to me
I just wish you would never leave me

Hey, this is our very first day
The clouds are grey, the sky is blue
I surely had no clue
Of how strong my feelings are for you

Hey, this is our very first day together
You shall spill all your secrets away
Tell me everything you've never thought you'd say
Please dear, don't stop halfway

Hey, this is our very first day
The clouds are grey, the sky is blue
I surely had no clue
Of all these feelings for you

Hey, this is our very first day together
Do you think we will stay like that forever?
Would you find me clever
If I said that I'd leave you never?
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Aabb CDdd Accc CDdd Aaaa
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 675
Words 141
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Shir Hanochi

"life isn't measured by the numbers of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away". With my poetry, I want to make more of those breathtaking moments, to put everything I feel into words and let everyone else enjoy it as well as learning from it.English is not my first language, therefore I'd like to hear any grammar or spelling mistakes. Thank you all for understanding, and enjoy reading. :) more…

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