Analysis of Love Me or Leave Me



Love me or Leave Me:

My skin may not be flawless,
There may be circles under these eyes,
My hair is mine regardless,
I have cellulite on my thighs,
I don't wake each day to be perfect,
At the best I am okay,
But you rather love me,
Or you leave,
That's about all I have to say,

I suffer from depression,
If you walked my trail you'd know,
That when I am quiet,
I am angry,
Cause if I said a word,
Then I would blow,
I have anxiety that's deeply,
Please don't mistake it,
For just fear,
Because if I could,
Then I would shake it,
But this is greater then may appear.

I may not wake each day to be perfect,
But at the best I am okay,
But decide,
You rather love me,
Or you simply walk away,

I am not competing for affection,
I've got to here,
Just as I am,
Yes I have a few small problems,
But underneath I'm still a gem,
So you take me,
Or you leave me,
You rather love me,
Or you don't,

But don't think that I will beg you,
Cause my dear I simply won't.


Scheme a bcbcdeaxe fgxaxgahixhi dexAe fxxxxaaAj xj
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111110 111101011 1111010 111111 111111101 101111 111011 111 10111111 1101010 1111111 111110 1110 111101 1111 110100110 11011 111 01111 11111 111101101 1111111101 1101111 11 11011 1110101 1110101010 1111 1111 11101110 1011101 1111 1111 11011 111 11111111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 932
Words 201
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 12, 5, 9, 2
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on December 26, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dustin Atwood

My name is Dustin, I am 29 but it feels as if I am a lot older by due of wear and tear.I credit this, to the way I write.I discovered Poetry, when I was 16 in high school.It was a way for me, to put my emotions on paper and get then out of my head. Time went on, and I discovered that using poetry, was in a sense my release from this world. I have struggled with sexuality, loss, depression, anxiety, self doubt, you will find these things in my writing.I like to think my writing is my souls dialogue.It is a voice that maybe the outside me, would never have the courage to say.It is things that have happened that many don't know, a sort of secret side of me. I hope you enjoy! more…

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