Analysis of Faking Into Goodbye
Faking into Goodbye:
I can fake most any smile,
Given the hour,
And the day,
I can monitor emotions,
By watching what I do,
And do not say,
I can make the world believe it,
That I am finally getting on,
But if they look into my eyes,
They'd know the show that I put on,
Cause In the middle of the night,
When the worlds asleep,
I let go,
I relinquish all my strength,
And let the tears flow,
It is easy to play alright,
In the presence of the sun,
But when it's night,
The sadness has won,
I can walk and talk to others like it's no thing,
Turn the radio up loud,
And let my voice ring,
I can go out to the parties,
The ones where people gather round,
But when there's no sound,
I cling unto my pillow like a lifeline,
I am jealous others have a dad,
And I don't have mine,
I can scream into the darkness,
Asking,
Why,
Why You,
But when the sun comes up I know just what to do.
I put on something stylish,
And I spray that smell,
That Paris Hilton cologne,
I know all to well,
And I play another person,
One that never felt a pain,
Never gone insane.
But when it's time to take the shirt off,
And the scents expired,
I am drained from playing characters,
For quite a while,
I give into the madness,
That has drove me off my ledge,
As I lay on the edge,
Of goodbye.
By. Dustin Atwood
Scheme | A BXCXDCXEXEFXGXGFHFHIXIXJJKXKLIADDXMXMHNNXXXBLOOA X |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (32%) Tetractys (30%) |
Metre | 10011 1111101 10010 001 11100010 110111 0111 11101011 111100101 11110111 11011111 10010101 10101 111 1010111 01011 1110111 0010101 1111 01011 111011101111 101011 01111 11111010 01110101 11111 1110110101 111010101 01111 11101010 10 1 11 110111111111 1111010 01111 1101001 11111 01101010 1110101 10101 111111011 00101 111110100 1101 1101010 1111111 111101 11 1101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,233 |
Words | 260 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 48, 1 |
Lines Amount | 50 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 322 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 87 |
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Submitted on December 28, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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