Analysis of Autism



The only sound drifting
through the late afternoon,
is the leaves rustling
through the long branches
of the dutch elm trees.
I watch you run through
knee-deep grass,
your outstretched arms
silhouetted by the dying sun.
Your shadow lengthens
as you weave away from me.
I want to pull you close
but you are twirling too fast.
The sun dips quickly
behind a cloud,
leaving you in the shadows.
I want to reach out
and rescue you
from the darkness,
but you are lost in the dancing
that makes up your world.
My son, I don't understand autism
but I try every day to understand you.

(April is Autism Month, we really need to find out what is causing this terrible disease. I wrote this for a friend for Autism month)


Scheme AXAXXBXXXXCXXCXXXBXAXXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 010110 10101 10110 10110 10111 11111 111 1011 01010101 1110 1110111 111111 1111011 01110 0101 101001 11111 0101 1010 11110010 11111 11110110 11110011011 101101110111111101100011111011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 684
Words 131
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 280
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Dee Edgett

I am a 60 year old womam, married 42 years. Live on a farm in Canada. Mother, grandmother. Love to write. Poems are a new adventure. I have had story stories and articles published. more…

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