Analysis of Observations On The Subject Of Family



Like a carpenter, we build our lives;

First by using a firm foundation.

In order to build that foundation;

One must build it on a level of moderation.

This level of moderation usually comes from family elders;

For the elders share their stories and wisdom.

This is how family values, comfort and traditions make the foundation worthy;

For the foundation must be strong enough to face challenges within and without.

Next are the supports of outside relationships within the family;

These help provide the walls with honor, stability and comfort.

Relationships and marriages attach everything as nails do.

Above the family is attached the crown of the family;

That is built by the parents and heads of the family with love and guidance shared;

This the ultimate roof where offspring are sheltered from the tempest;

Which eventually serves to provide the younger ones a future and family of their own.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 912
Words 178
Sentences 7
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

A family in my regard is a separate fortress from influences that are a danger to the family unit. A family has to be built strong in order to survive in the 21st century.

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Submitted by Sam4522z on April 04, 2023

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Johnny Millican

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