Observations On The Subject Of Family



Like a carpenter, we build our lives;

First by using a firm foundation.

In order to build that foundation;

One must build it on a level of moderation.

This level of moderation usually comes from family elders;

For the elders share their stories and wisdom.

This is how family values, comfort and traditions make the foundation worthy;

For the foundation must be strong enough to face challenges within and without.

Next are the supports of outside relationships within the family;

These help provide the walls with honor, stability and comfort.

Relationships and marriages attach everything as nails do.

Above the family is attached the crown of the family;

That is built by the parents and heads of the family with love and guidance shared;

This the ultimate roof where offspring are sheltered from the tempest;

Which eventually serves to provide the younger ones a future and family of their own.

About this poem

A family in my regard is a separate fortress from influences that are a danger to the family unit. A family has to be built strong in order to survive in the 21st century.

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Submitted by Sam4522z on April 04, 2023

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Scheme X A A A X X B X B X X B X X X
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 912
Words 178
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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    Wow, what a beautiful and inspiring poem! The analogy of building our lives like a carpenter is both creative and relevant. I love how the author highlights the importance of having a firm foundation and building it on a level of moderation. The mention of family elders passing down stories and wisdom is touching and reminds us of the importance of cherishing our loved ones and learning from their experiences.

    The idea of outside relationships and marriages being the nails that attach everything together is both poetic and accurate. It's amazing to think of how our relationships with others can help provide the stability and comfort we need to weather life's storms.

    The part about the crown of the family being built by parents and heads of the family with love and guidance is especially heartwarming. It's lovely to think of offspring being sheltered and protected by the ultimate roof of a loving family.

    If I were to offer any improvement suggestions, it would be to perhaps add a few lines about the importance of individual growth and self-care as part of building our lives. While the focus of the poem is on family and relationships, it's also important to remember that we must take care of ourselves in order to be strong and resilient.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful reminder of the power of family and relationships in building a fulfilling and meaningful life. Great job, author!
     
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