Analysis of undone



mind my kisses if you feel more than many,
signs of loneliness,  
tales of many,
subdue me if you must,
hear my stories over a burning plate,
whenever I felt you on those last days,
remember my drafts,  
tales of unreached journeys you wrote,
inside matchboxes with every scratch
a chance to burn,
volumes of my life tapped by delicate thunder,
mayhem on every line charred,
burning inside 55 engraved scars on my face,
you’re what I love next,
to what you’ve addicted me to,
55 pages  
55 heartaches
in your 25 years...     


Scheme ABACDEFGHIJKLMNOBP
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111110 11100 1110 011111 1110100101 0101111111 01011 1111011 011011001 0111 101111110010 1110011 1001011111 11111 11101011 10 1 011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 542
Words 110
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 403
Words per stanza (avg) 93

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life incomplete

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Written on March 07, 2023

Submitted by azdi404 on March 07, 2023

Modified on March 08, 2023

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