Analysis of undone
mind my kisses if you feel more than many,
signs of loneliness,
tales of many,
subdue me if you must,
hear my stories over a burning plate,
whenever I felt you on those last days,
remember my drafts,
tales of unreached journeys you wrote,
inside matchboxes with every scratch
a chance to burn,
volumes of my life tapped by delicate thunder,
mayhem on every line charred,
burning inside 55 engraved scars on my face,
you’re what I love next,
to what you’ve addicted me to,
55 pages
55 heartaches
in your 25 years...
Scheme | ABACDEFGHIJKLMNOBP |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101111110 11100 1110 011111 1110100101 0101111111 01011 1111011 011011001 0111 101111110010 1110011 1001011111 11111 11101011 10 1 011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 542 |
Words | 110 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 18 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 403 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 93 |
About this poem
life incomplete
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Written on March 07, 2023
Submitted by azdi404 on March 07, 2023
Modified on March 08, 2023
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