undone



mind my kisses if you feel more than many,
signs of loneliness,  
tales of many,
subdue me if you must,
hear my stories over a burning plate,
whenever I felt you on those last days,
remember my drafts,  
tales of unreached journeys you wrote,
inside matchboxes with every scratch
a chance to burn,
volumes of my life tapped by delicate thunder,
mayhem on every line charred,
burning inside 55 engraved scars on my face,
you’re what I love next,
to what you’ve addicted me to,
55 pages  
55 heartaches
in your 25 years...     

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life incomplete

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Written on March 07, 2023

Submitted by azdi404 on March 07, 2023

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACDEFGHIJKLMNOBP
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 542
Words 110
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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