into you



laughter runs through the waters
pure without an echo  
relaxing me once
hurting me twice          
sinking into your hair
I scream into your head to be heard
as I stand in the corner of your thoughts
under a shadow, you passed me down
into a memory
should've seen what I had for you
could've meant so much to you
sacred beliefs in a scarce land.

spiraled echos
dreams delayed
saving my traded soul
for complete control
edited memory pages
printing in your eyes  
that was scared to realize
standard rules of free falling.

footprints in the sand
traces weary feet
only to be taken away by the ocean tide
to hold the sacredness of you
satin of white from your lingerie
carefully laid on the beach
inspiring the moon, its color
and the night a mystic meaning   
and you were somewhere, lying on a beach  
naked, thinking,   
drawing in the sand ...
hey you    
recall me into you
recall me into you

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Written on March 23, 2023

Submitted by azdi404 on March 23, 2023

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Characters 917
Words 191
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 12, 8, 14

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