Analysis of Sleepless Nights



Sleep was unavailable,
as you tried all night.
That pain inside you,
put up a big fight.
All day you tried to beat it,
but it wouldn’t go away.
The medicine didn’t help,
so we upped the dose today.
I pray tonight that you rest,
and dream all good things.
Then wake up tomorrow,
and see what the day brings.
I hate to see you hurting,
and that I can’t make it go away.
There’s only one thing I can do,
and that’s get down and pray.
God, please take her pain,
and cast any worries aside.
I’m begging you for mercy,
to please make her pain subside.
Please give her some relief,
so she can rest a little while.
Maybe with a peaceful sleep,
it will bring back her smile.
Thinking back through the years,
just trying to reminisce,
My momma is a tough cookie,
and I’ve never seen her like this.
She was always so tough,
never went down without a fight.
Seeing her down like this,
just doesn’t seem right.
I’m not asking for more time,
just get her through this pain.
Make the meds start working,
I pray this in Jesus’ name.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110100 11111 11011 11011 1111111 111101 010011 1110101 1101111 01111 11101 011011 1111110 011111101 11011111 011101 11101 01101001 1101110 1110101 110101 11110101 1010101 111101 101101 110101 11010110 01101011 11111 10110101 100111 1111 1110111 110111 101110 1110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,057
Words 231
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 774
Words per stanza (avg) 196

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Momma battling cancer

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Written on October 04, 2022

Submitted by CatrinaFuentes on October 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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