Analysis of A Napkin at a Bar

Neil Dave 1993



Sitting here
Still, damp
A circular weight across my chest
Only flitting at the passing winds of commotion
Ready to be pulled out from under it all
Poised, waiting
To be pressed against your lips


Scheme ABCDEFG
Poetic Form
Metre 101 11 010010111 1010101011010 10111111011 110 1110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 195
Words 35
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

Inspired by a napkin underneath my whiskey, neat, and the dire need for a date at a bar called Saloon

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Written on August 09, 2022

Submitted by neilkdave on September 07, 2022

Modified by neilkdave on September 07, 2022

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Neil Dave

I'm a writer and stand up comedian trying my hand at poetry. If you enjoy any of my writing this is not what I do full time and any token of your appreciation is greatly appreciated as it will help fund making writing a greater part of my life and get more content to you! You can buy me a cup of coffee (or 2) here ko-fi.com/neilkdave, most of these were written on caffeine, all caffeine helps. more…

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