Analysis of He who made kesil



He who made Kesîl

Leaves are falling off the trees
And that’s when I write poems as these
About how the chilling weather
Can make you change into a sweater

As the temperature drops outside
You find a warm place to hide
The cold makes your nose feel sharp
As you go to catch some carp

The freshly frozen ground crinkles
As some snow begins to sprinkle
Your boots shuffle around the snow
And the wind begins to blow

Now that snow is in your face
you’ve really begun a race
To the lake just in time
To see the sun with it’s last shine

The colors dance around the sky
As you look with one last eye
You build a fire to keep warm
You just wish you were in your dorm

You fall asleep to birds delight
As some geese take their flight
At some point you wake up and see
Something that fills you up with glee

Millions of stars that twinkle and shine
You have to move your line
You reach across and grab your phone
Thankful that you are alone

Quickly you snap a picture
That reminds you of some scripture
You fall back asleep in awe
As you dream of a claw


Scheme X AABB CCDD AXEE FFXG HHII JJKK GGLL BBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1110101 011111011 01101010 111101010 10100111 1101111 0111111 1111111 0101011 11101110 11100101 0010111 1111011 1100101 101101 11011111 01010101 1111111 11010111 11110011 11011101 111111 11111101 10111111 101111001 111111 11010111 1011101 1011010 10111110 1110101 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,060
Words 218
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Written on January 29, 2022

Submitted by FaithfulServent on January 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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