Analysis of New Moon
Yesterday is gone still can't believe I'm waking up to a different tune
The world seems the same but the feeling felt like seeing a new moon
To the person whom I thought was my everything the one that I adored
Waking up to an empty pillow is not the vision I had in store
Now that you're gone the feeling of emptiness that gentle touch
Been having heartaches by the thoughts of dreaming too much
Turn on the radio everything seems to remind me of you
Laying back down closing my eyes expecting a different view
Can't find the words to express the shock everything seems surreal
The thought of living in a world without your love seem like a bad deal
Reality may someday hit me and while you wait for the next person in line
I wish you luck and reminisce the time I once called you mine
Thoughts of seeing you with another man and leaving me behind
I'm stronger than this Not going to lose to my fears where I'm still confined
The world seems kind of dark nowadays and the feelings of no one around
Sometime I forget the earth has billions of souls like me waiting to be found
Scheme | AAXX BBCC DDEE FFGG |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (75%) |
Metre | 101111011101101001 0110110101110011 10101111110011101 101111010110101101 111101011001101 110110111011 11010101101111 1011101101001001 11011010110101 01110001011111011 10111101111011001 11110010111111 1110110101010101 110111101111111101 01111110001011101 110101110111110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,076 |
Words | 208 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 54 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 216 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 52 |
About this poem
New beginnings after a failed one
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Written on July 12, 2021
Submitted by edilions on October 09, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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