Knocking on heaven s door

Pin Lim 1982 (Montreal)



Knocking on heavens door

I won't be the first nor the last person to try their luck and to win your hand
Don't know what I can offer more than be the best version of myself that I can
What I can give you goes beyond any physical form of luxury
To shower you with the kind love only you shall receive feel & see

But that thought of having you seems at the moment so far away
So I'm shooting for the moon and hopefully, things go my way
To give you my heart to add to my soul that I hope you'll see value  
Is more than any riches in the world to believe dreams do come true

The quest seems daunting but I want to try knocking at heavens door
See-through the end game and be satisfied with whatever in store
To accept that I at least tried/attempted  something for you to take notice
Got nothing else to lose so I'm taking a swing and see if I'll miss

An endless supply of love awaits you if you catch me falling
Into your arms, to a place, only you can hear me calling
The feelings that I have for you are in no way in short supply
Even for you, that is something you cannot deny.

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Written on July 21, 2021

Submitted by edilions on October 09, 2021

Modified on May 01, 2023

1:07 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XXBB CCDD AAXX EEFF
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,068
Words 219
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4

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