Analysis of UPON A CRYSTAL WORLD



Crystal Piscine swim
In lakes of liquid oxygen,
On some distant world.

Crystal cities rise
Way up into the sky,
Housing crystal beings.

Crystal people
Look like statues when asleep,
Look wonderful awake.

Crystal women
More gorgeous by far
Than any models here on Earth.

Crystal children are
Like beautiful glass dolls,
Too fragile to dare touch.

Crystal pets run free
Within the crystal towers,
Which sing in the wind.

Crystal woods hold
All manner of dangers,
Even for crystal people.

Crystal animals
Shriek like breaking glass,
Within the distant forest.

When nightfall comes
The crystal creatures stop,
Appearing just like statues.

Until break of dawn
When their lives resume,
And the towers sing in joy.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAX XXX BXX ACX CXX XDX XDB XXX XXX XXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 01110100 11101 10101 110101 101010 1010 111101 110001 1010 11011 11010111 10101 110011 110111 10111 0101010 11001 1011 110110 1011010 10100 11101 0101010 111 010101 010111 01111 11101 0010101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 750
Words 126
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

The final part of my Crystal World Trilogy.

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Written on June 04, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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