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I felt the poem was full of vibrant images and sensations. This allowed me to feel involved and the general message is one I could vibe with, we all want to escape poverty. Wisdom and prompts in the lines to evoke thought and had a satisfying ending so it gets my vote more »

lovely and I hope it all works out that way for you

RIP Tupcac good poem

I really like this, learn from my actions as words can be cheap show me don't tell me

oh I like this so much information and yet so little lets the mind fill in the blanks great poem

Wordsworth really was a master of poetry

Love cats have two myself male/female couldn't be more different in attitude

Oh I know that addiction is hard cycle to break, so try to find new hobbies and interests first to give you outside focus. Remember cold turkey doesn't work for most people. Meditation to find the source of the problem and then attempt to resolve it, this all takes time but small steps will still have you arriving at the place you need to be eventually good luck breaking free more »

ice cream and summer are partners in crime, I live in Ireland so we rarely see the sun so don't usually have this problem lol

This is so bright and full of lovely soft warm imagery that you almost feel yourself on the island enjoying it for yourself a great poem

nature hates a vacuum so in absence of love, what's left will fill the gap

This was brilliant poem, took me right there, and many great images and the feeling that the poet just wants one last winter with the lost heart before it all ends is just a great theme and it's a great poem more »

Was going to call my first born Jade, however I met a few Jade's before hand and changed my mind lol

I like this one very much as it tells a story in a very short time, and also gives glimpses into the character the writer inhabits

Wendy not being fussy but the line 'I give your wisdom and knowledge' works better when I read it aloud as 'I give you wisdom and knowledge' sounds better good poem though sorry to be a pain more »