My Own Reality Of Life



My spirit is too weak, for the pains of life heat,
If I knew potential to feel good, I would jump on it,
I would ask no one to be different so that you can feel good
about who your are,

The weight of hate in life is so heavily on the minds that
make the world fight for their own rights,
If you could change the cold world from their bad ways You would,

You would free yourself of all of that cumbersome impossibility
of needing to control the world, or control your mate, or control your child,

My spirit feels so heavily weak to see the way of a cold life
we live in day and night, others are even taken their own life,
In a life so cold,

I am the only one who creates my own reality,
For no one else can think for me, no one else can do it,
It is only I, every bit of it, I that can make a difference
in my own reality of life.

Lilly Emery
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Submitted on October 13, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABX XXB CX DDX CAXD
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 826
Words 177
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 3, 4

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