Oh Crystal moon what do you see



Oh crystal moon what do you see

The Moon Reveals lost emptiness
You know how this is goes lost with no hope
When your love leaves you blowing feelings in the wind,

Oh crystal moon what do you need to reveal for me
Oh slow autumn wind keeps coming around the been
If I could only touch what love felt like would be enough
to keep my heart wanting more ,

Oh true love where did you go ?
Why did you leave me all alone ?
The impalpable ash of a beaten down past love never made way back
My young heart wrinkled with time but you are always on my mind,

Everything carries me to you,
As if everything existed because of you ,
How fun that sound now just knowing I am alone and you are long gone doing what ever it is you do ,

Aromas, light, metals away as I watch the little boats sail away
Oh sadden moon what do you see for me ?
Oh love why did you cast your spell on me ?
Oh lost love how I had waited for you all this time
Please set my heart free from the pain you left me in ,

They say love is blind but I see just fine
But if  loving someone hurts you must set it free
and don't let that one bleed take it down easily like summers breeze,
But if that one finds his way back  to you it was always your 's .

Lilly Emery (c)
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Submitted on February 26, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XXB ACXX XXXB DDD XAAXC XAXX A
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,199
Words 250
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 4, 3, 5, 4, 1

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