La ventille oh cecelia
Len Lewis 1943 (Port of Spain, Trinidad)
Above the deep water harbour gazing
Port-of-Spain bustling at her feet.
La Ventille's brief is quite amazing
With huddled dwellings quaint and neat.
Drive up the twisted gradient sloping
About thirty-six geomet degrees.
The wide-eyed visitor goes up hoping
To enjoy the gentle breeze.
In cricket's island territories
The command of such a view
Is held by mortgage dignitaries;
Not simple folks like me or you.
La Ventille is indeed attractive
From its humble point of view;
Not hoity toity interactive
For fez children who are new.
This hilly upper-city starter
For Caribbean immigrants;
Who come by sloop to hawk and barter
But take up dual residence.
Sometimes it's tuneful hyperactive
While Desperadoes basemen grumble.
At other times it's counteractive
When young-to-die gang members crumble.
La Ventille's yearly days of reverence
Bring hooded pilgrims to the shrine.
From wine and sin some seek repentance
Through Lady Fatima's holy sign.
Their contrite rosaries and novenas
Could spare misguided wayward thugs
From police summons or subpoenas,
Or temper's high strung rock or slug.
First generation head-tied hawkers'
Young offspring really cannot cope
With gold-toothed dealers and fast talkers.
At risk they venture out on hope.
Their struggle after such arrival
Is really pitted against time,
'til seeking guaranteed survival
tempts them slowly into crime,
The long time scores of law-abiders
Who live on tamboo-bamboo hill,
Engulfed by old and new free-riders
Are gently law-abiding still.
They need expert communicators
To remind us they exist.
T'would help La Ventille's given image;
And give Ma. Placide's hill some twist.
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Submitted on May 09, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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