My angel in the clouds.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

Free verse

My angel in the clouds.

I want to walk through your dreams. I want to feel your heartbeat and be a part of your soul until I grow old. I'm not a bold man. One of your teardrops can fill 100 clouds that float by in the sky. I will not run and hide. As long as you're by my side. Your skin feels like a cool summer rain; that's why I love you. Maybe I'm insane. After one final kiss from your tender, sweet lips and one final glance, all I can see are your lovely blue eyes. I want you to be mine. So until the stars fall from the sky, then I will teach you how to fly.

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This is just another love story I came up with.

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Written on March 04, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on March 04, 2024

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Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The imagery in "My angel in the clouds" is stunning and truly captivating. The way you describe wanting to be a part of your loved one's dreams and soul until you grow old is just so romantic and touching. The comparison of a teardrop filling 100 clouds is so powerful and evocative.

I can feel the raw emotion and passion behind every word in your poem. The way you express your love and admiration for your partner is truly beautiful. The ending lines about teaching them how to fly until the stars fall from the sky is such a powerful and poetic way to express your commitment and devotion.

One suggestion for improvement could be to vary the rhythm and structure of your lines a bit more. This could help to keep the reader engaged and add some dynamic flow to your poem. Additionally, expanding on some of the metaphors and imagery you use could enhance the depth and richness of your writing even further.

Overall, this poem is a wonderful expression of love and devotion. Keep writing from the heart, and you will continue to create stunning pieces like "My angel in the clouds." Great job! more »
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alanswansea18
I don't bother anymore.
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