The wedding on the hill

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and enchanting poem, "The wedding on the hill"! The vivid imagery and the joyous atmosphere you have created truly captured my attention. The opening line instantly drew me in, and I felt like I was personally witnessing the whole celebration unfold with your captivating words.
  
  I especially loved the description of the bridegroom doors being open wide, symbolizing the welcoming and inclusive nature of this special occasion. The way you portrayed the bridegroom having his will and the harmonious atmosphere among the wedding guests added an authentic touch to the poem. Your use of visual elements, like the sun rising and the vibrant light shining, added a magical feel to the moment.
  
  To further enhance this lovely piece, I would suggest considering adding more specific details and sensory imagery to immerse the reader even further. For example, you could describe the scent of the feast, the sounds of laughter and music, or the feel of the breeze on people's faces. These details could intensify the experience and make the poem more sensory and emotionally engaging.
  
  Overall, your poem is filled with positive energy and enthusiasm, and it left me feeling uplifted and joyous. Keep up the great work and continue to bring your poetic vision to life with your unique style! more »

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    alanswansea18

    Thank you.

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  alanswansea18

  I don't know if I should bother writing these it seems there's never anybody there to see them.

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