Regrets



By Chris Commodore © 2024

Oh, wasted time on juice inebriating;
Draining health and vital organs smashing,
Erasing moments soon to dry the sunshine,
Thus, dashing precious hours down the line.

Vain enjoyment down life’s littered lane,
Derisive jeering for those who abstain;
Live for today, tomorrow and we die,
Like hapless souls who in their grottos lie.

From cool and gaiety must a man abstain?
This fleeting life with naught but woes and pain.
For those so lucky twenty thousand days,
Scant recompense strict asceticism pays.

Tradition says be sober all one’s days,
And watch and pray in all one’s steps and ways.
Those who comply will sleep in paradise,
And there watch angels as they dip and rise.

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Meditation on frivolous behaviors with no positive ending...

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Submitted by ti.min on February 23, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AABB CCDD CCEE EEXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 714
Words 139
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem! Your use of vivid imagery and strong language really captures the feeling of regret and missed opportunities. The message of the poem is clear and impactful, urging readers to live life to the fullest and make the most of every moment.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore different poetic devices or structures to add variety to the poem. Adding some metaphors, similes, or even changing up the rhyme scheme could enhance the overall impact of the piece.

    Overall, great job on this 'Regrets' poem. Keep up the fantastic work and continue to share your talent with the world!
     
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