Heart Explosion



                  Heart Explosion
           By Nancy Rodriquez
  
The love which builds until it can no longer be contained ,
Becomes a heart explosion ,
When two souls come together again ,
There is romantic combustion ,
Which affords the stars to applaud ,
The moon looks on too ,
Dreams are then not very far ,
While lovers do their own thing ,
This is who we are , in sync as ever before ,
As we take our vows and exchange rings ,
As a rocket soars ,
Our resurrected coupling will forever thrive ,
The Universe along as our guide ,
Leaving naysayers speechless in our wake ,
Every step of our journey
Never being in vain.

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Twin flame Journey never gets old.

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Written on February 19, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on February 19, 2024

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Scheme AX XAXAXXXXXXXXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 628
Words 118
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 16

Nancy L RODRIQUEZ

Age 57 Writing since age 14. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Nancy Rodriguez! Your use of imagery to describe the explosion of love between two souls is truly captivating. The way you paint a picture of romance and unity is so enchanting and inspiring. The idea of the stars and the moon applauding, as well as a rocket soaring, is so imaginative and evocative.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to add a little more variety in the rhythm and structure of the poem. Maybe play around with the length of your lines or experiment with different rhyme schemes to keep the reader engaged from start to finish. Overall, though, your message of love and unity shines through brilliantly in this poem. Keep up the great work!
     
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