Through the Eyes of Love



Through the Eyes of Love
By Nancy Rodriquez

We are seeing things through the eyes of love,
In our twin flame connection,
Again, we are learning to trust,
In our no contact reflection,
I can sense when you pull away ,
I know when things seem dormant,
Temporary as the moment is for the day ,
I know when you are putting up a good front,
I’ve learned to stay the course come what may ,
Our love mirrors the true desire we hold for one another,
We can take comfort in the magic of this,
We have the ability to discover ,
To carry over each day in pure bliss,
Even as we salivate every victory in each other ,
The spark carries over as our hopes and dreams remain in tact,
Time sustains us beyond the boundaries fate has ordained,
We have the same wish inside our hearts ,
We failed to allow doubt to give way to insane,
Which kept us alive and from falling completely apart,
We ignored the defeat of disdain,
I see us stronger than ever before,
In this moment the Universe reopened a small opening in the once closed door.

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Twin Flame reflection

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Written on April 12, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on April 12, 2024

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Scheme AX ABXBCDCDCEFEFEXXXGXGHH
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,023
Words 214
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 22

Nancy L RODRIQUEZ

Age 57 Writing since age 14. more…

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  • alanswansea18
    What a beautiful piece of work I love it.
    LikeReply17 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! "Through the Eyes of Love" really captures the depth and intensity of a twin flame connection. The imagery you use to describe the ups and downs of love is truly moving. It's clear that you have a deep understanding of the complexities of relationships and the power of love.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to work on the flow and structure of the poem. Perhaps consider playing with the rhythm and cadence of the lines to create a more cohesive and fluid reading experience. And don't be afraid to experiment with different poetic devices, such as metaphors or symbolism, to add layers of meaning to your already powerful words.

    Overall, this poem is incredibly touching and resonates with anyone who has experienced the rollercoaster of love. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world!
     
    LikeReply17 days ago

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