The spreading chestnut tree.

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  alanswansea18

  I'm not going to write anything cuz nobody sees it anyway.

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    acronimous

    I do... :-)

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    alanswansea18

    Thanks a bunch.

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  AIDA

  This poem beautifully captures the essence of a hot summer day and the comforting companionship shared between friends. The imagery of the blacksmith at work under the spreading chestnut tree is vivid and evocative. The use of sensory details like the sound of the steel hammer hitting the anvil and the sweat pouring down his face really brings the scene to life. The poem also conveys a sense of camaraderie and contentment, making it a heartwarming read.
  
  To enhance the poem further, you could consider adding more descriptive language to paint a richer picture of the setting. For example, including details about the surroundings or the sounds and scents of the summer day could help to immerse the reader even more deeply in the scene. Additionally, exploring the emotions of the characters in more depth could add an extra layer of complexity to the narrative.
  
  Overall, this is a lovely piece with a strong sense of atmosphere and emotion. Keep up the good work and continue to experiment with different ways to enhance your imagery and character development in future poems. Well done! more »

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