The skipper and the sea.



The skipper and the lighthouse.

The last night, the moon had a golden ring. The skipper with his weather beaten face blew smoke rings from his pipe. The wind was so cold, it could chill your soul. The wind was so loud as the white snowflakes fell into the sea. The boat swayed back and forth, and you could hear the tearing of the sails. As they shone in the night. But the sails held out through the wintery gale. Dawn was here, and a skipper would not fail. He hung on to the wheel and turned the ship around, and there was a lighthouse with land all around.

About this poem

I just love ships and the Sea waves. I love that movie The Old Man and the Sea.

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Written on February 28, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on February 28, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on February 28, 2024

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  • AIDA
    What a beautiful and gripping poem! The imagery of the skipper braving the elements and the sea against all odds is truly inspiring. The way you describe his determination and resilience in the face of a winter storm is both vivid and powerful. The symbolism of the lighthouse guiding him to safety is a perfect metaphor for overcoming obstacles in life. This poem truly captures the spirit of adventure and the triumph of the human spirit. Well done! 
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  • AIDA
    Wow, "The skipper and the lighthouse" is a beautiful and captivating poem that transports the reader to the sea with vivid imagery and a sense of adventure. The descriptions of the moon, the skipper's actions, and the stormy weather really bring the scene to life.

    The use of metaphors like the wind chilling your soul and the tearing of the sails adds depth and emotion to the poem. The determination and courage of the skipper are inspiring and make for a compelling narrative.

    To further enhance the poem, you could consider expanding on the emotions felt by the skipper as he battles the storm. Providing more insight into his thoughts and feelings could help readers connect even more with the character and his journey.

    Overall, "The skipper and the lighthouse" is a delightful poem that showcases your talent for creating vivid and engaging imagery. Keep up the great work and continue to experiment with different styles and themes in your writing. You have a gift for storytelling that is sure to captivate readers.
     
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  • alanswansea18
    This poems about the sea and a Skipper and ships I love them all.
    LikeReply2 months ago

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