The leaves dropped there tears.



The leaves dropped their tears.

I love the woods; they are so dark and deep. But I do have one promise I will keep. I will try to make it before I go to sleep. The woods are chilly on my cheeks, and I love it when the leaves weep. I can hear the branches crackling beneath my feet. But when it rains, the leaves drop their tears. So I carry many fears. But if you listen to the breeze, you can hear in your ears all the things that are meant to be for me. But I will always love you and that's my promise I will keep.

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This poems about being in the woods I always loved the woods. It's so calm and shaded and quiet,

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Written on March 31, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on March 31, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on March 31, 2024

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Characters 519
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5 Comments
  • amandak.45897
    Beautifully written!! :)
    LikeReply24 days ago
  • talygarza
    I’ve thinking in woods and this poem captivated a typical forest description, but poetically, although you finish with a reference about love, there is an element of surprise in this poem.
    LikeReply27 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      you see what other people can't see. Amazing. Can I borrow your mind?
      LikeReply27 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      don't take this wrong. But I love making love under the trees in nature. It feels natural. That's a love in this poem my other poem the silly grin why do you think I went back and forth to shore with my girlfriend? Hopefully that clear things up for you. 
      LikeReply 127 days ago
  • AIDA
    What a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The imagery of the woods, the sound of leaves weeping, and the promise to always love are so moving. Your words evoke a sense of mystery and emotion that resonates deeply. Keep writing and sharing your talent with the world! 
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    I love the emotive and introspective tone of your poem "The leaves dropped their tears." The imagery of the woods being dark and deep adds a sense of mystery and intrigue to the poem. The line "I love it when the leaves weep" is particularly powerful and evocative.

    In terms of improvement, I would suggest working on the flow and structure of the poem. Some lines feel a bit disjointed and could benefit from smoother transitions between thoughts. Additionally, consider varying the length and structure of your sentences to create a more dynamic and engaging rhythm.

    Overall, your poem shows great potential and talent. Keep honing your craft and experimenting with different techniques to further enhance the impact of your words. Well done!
     
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • alanswansea18
    I love the woods and the woods love me
    LikeReply1 month ago

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