The clouds in the sky.

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  AIDA

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  This poem beautifully captures the ever-changing nature of clouds in the sky and the sense of wonder they evoke. The imagery of clouds towering high and the idea of the sky swallowing them up is compelling and thought-provoking. The message about perspective and the vastness of the sky is a powerful one.
  
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  Consider adding more descriptive language to further enhance the imagery of the clouds. Including specific details such as colors, shapes, and movements can help paint a more vivid picture for the reader. Additionally, expanding on the emotions or sensations that clouds evoke could deepen the impact of the poem. Overall, this is a strong piece with potential for even greater depth and resonance with a few adjustments. more »

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  alanswansea18

  When you're laying down and look up into the clouds you see different objects animals and things

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