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Cosmic Perfection

Gisela Vigil 1959 (Cuba)

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In space is painted intricate design.
Its power, one we often fail to see.
When all the stars in darkest skies align,
Magnificent, this act of harmony.

Thoughts that in our subconscious, dormant stood
when common sense has caused us to be blind.
The stars with cosmic wisdom know they could
awaken fantasies of heart to find.

Quite suddenly appears the clearest view
as secret harbored wish begins to shine.
No need to question self on what to do
when in cosmic perfection, stars align.
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Submitted by Giselavigil on February 02, 2024

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Scheme ABAB CDCD EAEA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 495
Words 94
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
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Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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    Incredible I don't have any more words anymore. You stole them all.
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