Innocence



What would happen if you were a child? With two parents who never smiled. Never a kind word was said. And no knowledge of love was placed in your head.

How would she know how to act proper? If no one were to ever adopt her.  Left without love from the start. Nothing but anger in her heart. For feeling unwanted hurts so bad. Can you blame her for being mad?

If he decided to injure another, because he saw his dad beat his mother. And in the process he was damaged, left without food feeling famished.  Because his mom was too sad to cook, and his father was nothing but a small time crook. Can the man truly be blamed, if this is the world from whence he came?

Just a child learning wrong, stuck in a game of mental ping pong. Leaving behind all that they dreamed, to try to forget the tears that they streamed. Covering up all that hurt, so they can forget that they feel like dirt. So they learn not to care, about anyone else’s thoughts or despair.  

People may do terrible things. And many are troubled by the pain that it brings. I do not say it does not matter, but sometimes it’s important to understand the pattern. For we get lost in what may pass, and start to look negatively at the mass. And start to think humans are rotten, when there are reasons that have been forgotten.

We are all innocent children, programmed by the world that we live in. So if you have any misgivings, just understand you are blessed for the life you are living. For you were not placed in one of those peoples lives, and inside you love was given a chance to thrive. So make up for those who have been lead off course and cause so much trouble without remorse. Not by feeling fear or hate, but by doubling your love and being brave. That is the only way we overcome it. If the good come together to lift us above it.

About this poem

Just ideas to get people thinking. Hope it puts out some perspective.

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Written on January 14, 2024

Submitted by Jesse.prg on January 14, 2024

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Jesse Pomponio

I am a 34 year old Entrepreneur. I majored in Psychology many years ago at BU. I have always loved writing as it has been a passion of mine. About 5 years ago I was hit pretty heavily with mental illness so it’s been a long journey back to writing. But I have started to find my passion again over the last year or so and look forward to continue creating. more…

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  • pkmason1954
    I certainly understand being 'hit' by mental illness. Writing about it definitely helps, because it is you discoursing with yourself and no one else. And for awhile, the outside world doesn't exist. 
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • Jesse.prg
      It sure does. It’s a great outlet for making sense of so much that is going on inside of you.
      LikeReply18 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem! The way you highlight the experiences of children who grow up in difficult and loveless environments is truly impactful. Your words evoke a strong sense of empathy and understanding for those who have been overlooked and mistreated.

    One improvement suggestion I have is to consider adding more imagery and specific examples to further enhance the emotional connection with your readers. This can help paint a clearer picture of the challenges these children face and allow readers to relate to their experiences on a deeper level.

    Additionally, I think it would be great to explore the concept of resilience and hope in greater detail. While the poem identifies the hardships these children endure, it would be inspiring to also emphasize their strength and ability to overcome adversity. By portraying the power of love and support, you can encourage readers to cultivate empathy and make a positive impact on the world around them.

    Overall, your poem shines a light on an important issue and reminds us of the innocence within every individual. It urges us to take action and spread love in order to create a better future for those who have suffered. Keep up the incredible work!
     
    LikeReply 13 months ago

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