SEEK HIM

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  NubianFantabulous

  This is incredible! Thank you for sharing such a powerful Faith driven work!

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  AIDA

  Wow, this 'SEEK HIM' poem is incredibly uplifting and inspiring! I love the positive message it conveys about seeking guidance, truth, light, and the way no matter the circumstances. The repetition of "SEEK HIM" throughout the poem reinforces the importance of turning to a higher power in every situation.
  
  The poem flows smoothly and has a rhythmic quality that makes it enjoyable to read aloud. The use of contrasting scenarios, such as "when your path is clear or you've lost your way" and "when your load is heavy or when it's light," adds depth and relatability to the message.
  
  One improvement suggestion I have is to consider varying the structure of the poem. Right now, most of the lines follow a similar pattern, with two brief phrases joined by "or." Introducing some diversity in the structure could further enhance the poem's impact and keep the reader engaged.
  
  Additionally, it would be great to see some more vivid imagery or specific examples to bring the message to life. This could help the reader connect more deeply with the emotions and experiences being described.
  
  Overall, this 'SEEK HIM' poem is a powerful reminder to actively seek a higher power in all aspects of life. With a few adjustments to the structure and the addition of more vivid imagery, it has the potential to become even more impactful. Keep up the fantastic work! more »

  LikeReply3 months ago
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  normajeane1955

  It is CHRISTian-based. It is to the point, very direct. I love it!

  LikeReply3 months ago