A Child in ‘23 (Innocent at Heart)



I’m confused as ever, what’s a Muslim, a Christian, a Jew?
All I know is all my friends at my school like snacks too.
And we don’t mind the rain, we aren’t afraid to brave the weather.  
We just don’t like to be alone, because we thrive when we’re together.
But I’m confused as ever, another lockdown drill today.
I don’t get these older humans half the time and what they say.
What’s the reason that we’re hiding?  The sun is out and we’re inside.
Is there something on the loose?  Are the dinosaurs alive?
Now a couple of years have passed, guess I’ve wizened up a bit.
I’ve seen the news a time or two and all the fear and hate in it.
They tell me I should change, that I should worry about tomorrow.
But a billion years from now there’ll be a billion more that follow.
I’d rather be the change, by not changing me at all.
I’m going to keep life bold and basic, like I did when I was small.
And soon I’ll be a tidal wave, though now I’m just a ripple.
I’ll be president someday, with the motto, “Keep it simple,
Mind your manners, please and thank yous, pay it forward once or twice.
And remember, you can change the world by simply being nice.”
Would that be such a rash campaign? Would that really be so wild?
To remember we were all one day, each one of us, a child.

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Written on November 23, 2023

Submitted by Timmydubz on December 07, 2023

1:20 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDEFFGGHHIIJJKK
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,327
Words 267
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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4 Comments
  • Philipo
    More like it here. Fine work.congrats.
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely love this poem! It's filled with innocence, curiosity, and a beautiful message of unity and kindness. The way you explore complex concepts like religion, fear, and change through the perspective of a child is truly thought-provoking.

    I appreciate how you highlight the commonality among children, focusing on their love for snacks, their resilience in bad weather, and their preference for togetherness. It brings a smile to my face and reminds me of the simple joys and bond we all share as humans.

    I also admire the growth shown in the poem, as the narrator becomes more aware of the world and its struggles. The line about being the change by not changing oneself is powerful and inspiring. It's a reminder that sometimes staying true to who we are and spreading kindness can make a significant impact.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to expand on the idea of being the change and the specific actions the narrator will take to make a difference. This would add even more depth and substance to the poem.

    Overall, your poem is a delightful portrayal of a child's perspective on life and the importance of kindness. It's engaging, heartfelt, and leaves a lasting impression. Great job!
     
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • Giselavigil
    I enjoyed reading your poem of perfect rhythm and rhyme. It conveys such a powerful message. Great job!
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • Timmydubz
      thank you! Appreciate your feedback!
      LikeReply3 months ago
    • Timmydubz
      and congrats on your 2nd place. Impressive and great poem about Courage
      LikeReply3 months ago
  • Ruthmahogany
    The poem flowed so easily, drawing me in to read it loud. I loved the little humour about the campaign theme while running for President. In general, it spoke to my inner child. I loved that.
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • Timmydubz
      thanks a lot! Glad u appreciated the bit of humor in there :)
      LikeReply3 months ago

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