The Burning Candle

Gisela Vigil 1959 (Cuba)



The Burning Candle
(A Sonnet)

Once long ago, when life for me was new,
I could not walk unless I held a hand.
With mind of child, did not know what to do.
With innocence, I could not understand.
Throughout my growing years someone was there.
From where I stood she seemed so very tall.
Collected tears while nurturing each care.
Providing safety net for when I’d fall.
Today I’m standing tall as she grows weak.
Years causing aging mind things to forget.
To walk some minor steps my hand may seek.
Begins my turn to be the safety net.

Look at the flame of candle how it burns,
as wheel of life forevermore it turns.

About this poem

I wrote this Sonnet years ago about my mother as I saw her aging. She was always my right hand, then I became hers. She passed 5 years ago.

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Written on 2010

Submitted by Giselavigil on December 31, 2023

Modified by Giselavigil on December 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX ABABCDCDEFEF GG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 634
Words 131
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 12, 2

Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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