Lost Love

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautifully heartfelt poem! The emotions you've poured into these words are truly captivating. Your use of vivid imagery, such as the "sparkling eyes" and the "pounding heart," really brings the reader into that moment of lost love. The rhythm and flow of the poem also contribute to its overall impact.
  
  One improvement suggestion I have is to consider adding more specific details or personal anecdotes to enhance the reader's connection with the story. This could help create a stronger emotional impact and make the poem even more relatable.
  
  Additionally, you may want to consider exploring different poetic techniques to add depth and complexity to your poem. For example, incorporating metaphors or symbolism could add another layer of meaning to your exploration of lost love.
  
  Overall, this is a fantastic start to a poignant poem. With a few tweaks and the exploration of new poetic techniques, it has the potential to become even more powerful. Keep up the great work! more »

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  luisestable1

  This poem ends with a good question.
  The poem is good in its rhyme-scheme and the poetic language and why the love did not go on and just to guess. The poem does not go into that; only that it was not so.
  Good read. more »

  LikeReply 14 months ago