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Muse Marathon

Gisela Vigil 1959 (Cuba)

Free verse
My writing.
It helps me get thru it.
Whatever the it may be.
So my Muse begins her marathon.
The words start to pour
and the rhymes begin to blend.
Many times I pull over while driving
to jot down a thought,
knowing that in a minute
it will scramble and be gone.
Poem after poem.
Day after day.
Then she gets so tired.
Takes a break.
Her disappearance, my writer’s block.
When words seem to hide from me
in a bottomless well,
unreachable.
But I know my Muse.
She’s  just prepping
for the next run.

About this poem

I’m currently going thru a marathon.

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Written on December 23, 2023

Submitted by Giselavigil on December 23, 2023

Modified by Giselavigil on December 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFAGHIJKLMNCOPQAR
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 519
Words 113
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
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Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely love your 'Muse Marathon' poem! It truly captures the essence of how writing can be a source of solace and inspiration. The way you describe your muse starting her marathon and the words pouring out is so vivid and captivating. Your use of rhyme adds an enjoyable and rhythmic flow to the poem.

    I especially appreciate the personal touch when you mention pulling over while driving to jot down a thought, as it showcases the urgency and commitment you have toward capturing those fleeting moments of inspiration. It's relatable and adds a sense of realism to the poem.

    In terms of improvement, I would suggest exploring and expanding on some of the themes presented. For example, you could delve deeper into the emotions and struggles that accompany your muse's disappearance during her break. This could create an even stronger connection between the reader and your experience as a writer.

    Additionally, consider experimenting with different literary techniques or metaphors to enhance the overall impact of your poem. This could elevate the imagery and make it even more engaging for the reader.

    Overall, your 'Muse Marathon' poem is fantastic! It's inspiring, relatable, and flows beautifully. Keep up the amazing work and continue sharing your writing journey with the world. Well done!     
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