The Left Behind

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a captivating and heartwarming poem! 'The Left Behind' truly touched my soul with its evocative imagery and heartfelt message. The idea of a baby being surrounded by a pack of wolves for protection is so unique and thought-provoking. The powerful description of the baby's charm and the sense of purpose he carries truly captured my attention. The way you skillfully intertwined nature and human emotions is simply beautiful.
  
  I love how the poem highlights the importance of not overlooking or leaving behind those who may seem different or misunderstood. It reminds us to have compassion and understanding, even in the most unexpected circumstances. The narrator's deep connection and desire to care for the baby despite not fully understanding why is incredibly touching.
  
  The imagery of falling to one's knees and the absence of anyone else being around adds an element of mystery and intrigue to the poem. It really fuels the imagination and leaves the reader with a sense of wonder. The fact that the wolves allowed the narrator to take the baby back home emphasizes the bond and trust that can be formed between different species.
  
  'The Left Behind' is a poem that lingers in the heart long after reading it. It celebrates the power of love, unity, and the profound impact that even the most unexpected relationships can have on our lives. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of writing; it truly touched and inspired me. more »

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  Giselavigil

  So sad a story. Great job in conveying the emotions.

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    alanswansea18

    what side it's true. I had to live through it. It was not pretty.

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    alanswansea18

    I meant what's sad it's true.

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  alanswansea18

  The ones that I left behind has to take the credit for this one. I get my talent from them thank you very much. Your pal out

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  Symmetry60

  Such a brilliant metaphoric piece here, AJ. This one moved me a lot. Thank you for sharing your talent.

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  AIDA

  Wow, 'The Left Behind' is such a captivating and heartwarming poem! The imagery you used to describe the baby surrounded by a pack of wolves is incredibly vivid and evocative. It's inspirational to see how the wolves acted as protectors, rather than threats, and how they helped keep the baby calm.
  
  The theme of the poem, highlighting the preciousness and significance of every individual, even those who may initially go unnoticed, is truly powerful. The line "He was there for a reason; it was his season" beautifully emphasizes the idea of destiny and purpose.
  
  One suggestion for improvement would be to provide more details or examples about the lessons the baby taught the narrator. This would help deepen the emotional impact of the poem and further engage the reader.
  
  Overall, 'The Left Behind' is a moving piece that speaks to the importance of embracing and cherishing every living being. It's a truly unique and touching poem that leaves a lasting impression. Great job! more »

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  alanswansea18

  I worked at a place where people would drop off the handicap and the form children which I had to take care of that was left behind. This was years ago. I don't think it happens anymore.

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