What Captured My Attention (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



What Captured My Attention   (Bussokusekika)

Of Occam’s razor
When I think of Miami
I’ll think of you deer
Your picture does not capture
Your nonchalant graceful steps
What captured my attention

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/11/2023

About this poem

I must commend you Mary Ann…You do know how to choose the best bait for the fish you are trying to catch…I hope the picture does not hold any copyrights…And Buttercup insists it is nothing more than a computer generated image…She was even more captivating in real life without the darned filters…Oh well…Maybe I should have never ventured out of my safe little fish bowl…

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Written on December 11, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AXXAXX X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 244
Words 40
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1

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