Analysis of What Captured My Attention (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



What Captured My Attention   (Bussokusekika)

Of Occam’s razor
When I think of Miami
I’ll think of you deer
Your picture does not capture
Your nonchalant graceful steps
What captured my attention

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/11/2023


Scheme X AXXAXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 1110 1111010 11111 1101110 101101 1101010 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 244
Words 40
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

I must commend you Mary Ann…You do know how to choose the best bait for the fish you are trying to catch…I hope the picture does not hold any copyrights…And Buttercup insists it is nothing more than a computer generated image…She was even more captivating in real life without the darned filters…Oh well…Maybe I should have never ventured out of my safe little fish bowl…

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Written on December 11, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 11, 2023

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