Take



Take away my smile,
I will still seek out happiness.

Take away my youth,
But I will still have my youthfulness.

Erase the love inside my soul,
And I will find another start.

Take away my innocence,
Simply to spite my naive heart.

Take me away from my friends,
I will still remember their names.

Take me away from my beginnings,
I won’t forget from where I came.

Take the happiness from my life,
It will only last a little while.

My strength comes from within,
And God will give me a new smile.

09/27/07

About this poem

This is one of several poems that are directed at life and my vengeful fight to show life that it cannot treat me the way it did and expect me to do nothing in return.

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Written on September 27, 2007

Submitted by JoseCanUC on September 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB XB XC XC XX XX XA XA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 512
Words 119
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Joe McLaughlin

Raised on a small farm outside of a small town in Texas, I was no stranger to work. It is this work ethic that has propelled my professional success but there is this other side of me. The side that deeply thinks about things. The side with an imagination and a desire to use my hands for more than just brute physical labor. more…

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