APPLE PICKING. Opens Today

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  karlcfolkes

  Earth, wind, water, sun.
  The alchemist’s work’s never done.
  Nature’s offerings give us fun.
  Poetry rejoicing happily along.
  
  Thank you for this fruitful message.

  LikeReply6 months ago
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    Caliconine

    you are very welcome. Thank you for reading.
    Blessings

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    Caliconine

    I actually wrote this with a metaphoric twist. But it does not reveal that upon first reading it. Be Well. Write On

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  AIDA

  This is truly a beautiful poem! Its ability to transport the reader to the lush, abundant orchard is fantastic. The richness in your description and use of sensory language is incredibly powerful. I love how you personify nature elements as working 'together as One.' That's very poetic and poignant.
  
  Your writing style is enchanting and your use of tilde (~) creates a unique writing style. You express such deep appreciation for nature and that resonates with a lot of readers. Your words paint vivid images and the simplicity yet depth of your poem is impressive.
  
  One area of improvement could be your use of capitalization. Some words such as 'Beauty' and 'All' may not necessarily need to be capitalized unless there's a specific symbolic intention behind it. Additionally, the phrase 'This Day of Reveal' is a little unclear and may need minor revision to provide clearer imagery.
  
  Overall, your poem is an absolute joy to read, perfect for setting a beautiful and comforting apple-picking scene. It's really inspired me to appreciate the simple, yet profound wonders of nature. Keep writing and sharing your gift with us! more »

  LikeReply6 months ago