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Woman of my dreams

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)

You are everything i have ever wanted in a woman.  

What i have found in you
restores my confidence in humanity.

Your compassionate concern
fills me with wonder and delight

that you choose
to give strength despite my weaknesses intrigues me, evoking curiosity

What does the mystery of you consist of?

It is the why i cannot explain
 or the sense of empathy which exists
or how it comes to be

Growing continually between us as
we become more intimate,

looking deeply into each other's eyes  

Touching each other’s worlds

as they gradually merge,
condensing our hopes and dreams

Until they become one

in, with…  

And for…
the woman of my dreams  

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Written on December 09, 2006

Submitted by Charles2 on August 20, 2023

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Scheme A XB XX XB C XXB XX X X XD A XD C
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 710
Words 153
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1
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